Website Refresh

Audited and rewrote Starlight Gold’s website.

See the before and after below.

The Goal

The goal of this website is to provide information for jewelers wanting to source ethical gold, as well as for their customers wanting to know where their gold is coming from.

Audit Findings

  • The hero section was too large because viewers had to scroll down to see the headline

  • The headline needed to convey both a feeling and the deepest benefit to viewers

  • The customer journey needed to flow better 

  • The titles needed to match their content

  • The webpages needed to be optimized for both skimming and deep reading

  • The copy needed to feel enchanting while still being clear and informative

The Result

  • A headline that captures two deep benefits in 6 words:

    • 1. Wanting ethically sourced gold

    • 2. While also wanting a true statement piece they can wear

  • A subhead that gives a snapshot of how this gold lives up to these benefits

  • New webpage titles for a seamless customer journey

  • Webpages that are enchanting and informative

Before

Old Headline:

EXPLORE THE EXTRAORDINARY WORLD OF OUR PRECIOUS GOLD

Old Headline for the STARLIGHT DNA page:

THE CELESTIAL ESSENCE: STARLIGHT GOLD AND THE COSMIC CONNECTION

Discovering the Cosmic DNA of Starlight Gold

After

New Headline:

GOLD THAT TRULY MAKES A STATEMENT

From pure New Zealand origins to cutting-edge sustainable mining: Know the whole story of your gold with Starlight

New Headline for the STARLIGHT DNA page:

FROM THE DEPTHS OF NEW ZEALAND’S PRISTINE LANDSCAPES TO THE SYMBOL OF ETERNAL LOVE

Carry a pure piece of cosmic essence wherever you go

See the full After here:
Starlight Website Copy Doc.

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